I'm in a different, less bitter, part of my life. But I still like what I wrote. (while I was in the United States. This is nothing about my Aussies mates.)
Who am I?
I am the shadow you chase on the sidewalk,
the favorite tune that you can't quite recall.
I am the dream you forget in the sunlight.
The cliff that watches the climber’s fall.
You cannot snatch me, nor catch me, nor trap or me define.
I will elude you, I will confuse you, I will lose you in good time.
4 comments:
WOW! definately like it. Dark but very good.
:D thanks. i'm really excited about it. like a little girl coming back from grade 1 class with a painted picture for the frig. :)
I like it a lot - it really fits you and I think I understand it (maybe a little too well).
Simple and effective.
i'd say this was my attitude toward a couple guys from Union the semester i got back to the States.
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